Help Finished writing my first note, will someone lmk if it’s okay?

[M.O.N]

what the title says, just looking for someone I can pm to review it for me. I tried to avoid wording that might unintentionally add to the mental and emotional burden but I don't want it to sound too detached either. I'm also worried it might be too casual at some parts, I don't want to undermine his pain. looking for brutal honesty!

 

[Whatshouldmynamebe]

you can pm me!

 

[jordan6243]

I feel the struggle. I've written a few to different people but I always scrap them because I have no idea how to write one.

 

[Kompass]

Im always open if you need help =)

 

[M.O.N]

I feel the struggle. I've written a few to different people but I always scrap them because I have no idea how to write one.

I get you. this is my 5th or so draft, words seem so insignificant once I look at them. I hope you're able to find the right words to leave behind <3 wishing you luck