binturong

binturong

shining of stars calls me home
Jul 4, 2019
81
When I had another cold, I needed something to take my mind off the discomfort, then I started looking for a rhyme and got really into it, this is what I got. It probably looks strange because part of it is created intuitively. I don't know if I'll make up a melody, it's just for the forum anyway.
Please don't judge me too harshly, I've never seriously made up poems in English before, and I don't know the grammar, I got help from deepl.

Someone said you're not alone
And never picked up the phone
Someone said it would get better
And disappeared a few days later

While I cry in despair and drown
People just don't want to know
Hiding from the grim truth
They will never accept my proof

For I am where I am these days
In the fields of suffering love blooms
Shines, then fades and decays
This is life, this is truth

I find something familiar on every page
In the little house on the edge
This sincerity is like a firefly
like a hug like a last goodbye

Unbearably tired, almost dead
But I'm okay with that
At least in my sadness I'm not alone
Whatever it is, one day I'll come home

For I am where I am these days
In the fields of suffering love blooms
Shines, then fades and decays
This is life, this is truth
 
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qw3rty259

qw3rty259

CTB by a ticket soon
Jun 19, 2023
162
Here it is. Not really a song but rather a poem 🗿:

When I raise my right hand up
And say that I'm a member of SS
People around me say I am dumb
And I am finding it strange

Why would they want to put me in the mud?
When I'm desperately crying for help
And just straightening my right hand and palm
To show them that my wrist was cut
In an attempt
To make it all end
 
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qw3rty259

qw3rty259

CTB by a ticket soon
Jun 19, 2023
162
Here it is. Not really a song but rather a poem 🗿:

When I raise my right hand up
And say that I'm a member of SS
People around me say I am dumb
And I am finding it strange

Why would they want to put me in the mud?
When I'm desperately crying for help
And just straightening my right hand and palm
To show them that my wrist was cut
In an attempt
To make it all end
Hit of the SaSu summer 2024
 

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