trytrytryagain
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- Nov 30, 2023
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Idk feel free to share any poetry/lyrics you guys have come up with here. Or even ones from songs and poems you like in general.
I honestly don't know how to write poetry in a structural sense at all but this is just some random stuff in my brain.
I'll start first with my shitty one so you feel better about sharing:
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Anatomy of a heart:
If I cut my heart in half
Ventricle facing ventricle,
Would the two mismatched sides
Repair themselves back?
Or would one end rot
While the other finds its perfect half?
I can peel myself from these incisions
Reveal to you
I am nothing but
Meat, bone and tears.
A useless animal,
That can't hunt for its peers.
I am the sum of my parts,
Which are never enough.
If I finish it from the start,
Can I finally heal my heart?
--
I know it's kinda disjointed but just some fun word combinations I came up with that made my brain feel slightly less bad.
Anyways share any piece of poetry that made you feel better if you want.
I honestly don't know how to write poetry in a structural sense at all but this is just some random stuff in my brain.
I'll start first with my shitty one so you feel better about sharing:
--
Anatomy of a heart:
If I cut my heart in half
Ventricle facing ventricle,
Would the two mismatched sides
Repair themselves back?
Or would one end rot
While the other finds its perfect half?
I can peel myself from these incisions
Reveal to you
I am nothing but
Meat, bone and tears.
A useless animal,
That can't hunt for its peers.
I am the sum of my parts,
Which are never enough.
If I finish it from the start,
Can I finally heal my heart?
--
I know it's kinda disjointed but just some fun word combinations I came up with that made my brain feel slightly less bad.
Anyways share any piece of poetry that made you feel better if you want.