Venting Half Alive - Decaying

[Archness]

I'm only half alive,
Half of me has already died.

I'll only decay,
There aren't any injures for you to mend, I'm merely disintegrating.

I've already reached my half-life once so young,
I'm supposed to bear this three more times? or more?

No, I'm not alive,
I'm undead, my spirit gone already.

 

[Valky]

Beautifully written :) I really like this

 

[MewtwoIsAlive]

Is this a song or a poem?

 

[outrider567]

I'm only half alive,
Half of me has already died.

I'll only decay,
There aren't any injures for you to mend, I'm merely disintegrating.

I've already reached my half-life once so young,
I'm supposed to bear this three more times? or more?

No, I'm not alive,
I'm undead, my spirit gone already.

Many of those words apply to me totally

 

[Archness]

Is this a song or a poem?

Poem, original, it's a collaborative effort of three persons actually.

Me, myself, and I.

 

[MewtwoIsAlive]

Poem, original, it's a collaborative effort of three persons actually.

Me, myself, and I.

Crazy

 

[charlotte_]

Very well written poem! It's really relatable, and I understand your feelings behind each words.