Advice on my note

[Ghostly]

Yo yo yo so I'm dead sorry you had to see my corpse sorry if this comes across as very casual but give this note to Clifford after you read it my computer can go to my sister and all my money can go to Anthony or grandma thank you

Sincerely Dexter

 

[sadworld]

Uhhh... I would lie if I said it's a beautiful note but it fulfills its purpose I guess...

 

[lookingtoendit]

Notttt yo yo yo

 

[Spitfire]

It is short and to the point. There is thoughtful concern shown for the people who may end up finding your corpse. I like the thank you and sincerely parts.

If it is what you want to say then that is the most important thing.

 

[mikenoir]

Yo yo yo so I'm dead sorry you had to see my corpse sorry if this comes across as very casual but give this note to Clifford after you read it my computer can go to my sister and all my money can go to Anthony or grandma thank you

Sincerely Dexter

'Tis sublime. I would just stick that on the fridge with a souvenir magnet.

 

[Ghostly]

Uhhh... I would lie if I said it's a beautiful note but it fulfills its purpose I guess...

I can rewrite it I feel it comes across to causal

 

[GoodPersonEffed]

I can rewrite it I feel it comes across to causal

Not so much casual as callous imo.

 

[sadworld]

I can rewrite it I feel it comes across to causal

Yeah, I don't really think "yo yo yo" is a nice way to start lmao

 

[CrazyMary]

Is there anything else you want to say? Any thanks to your grand ma or sister? Any explanation of why you did this so they dont have any doubts?

 

[Nymph]

Sounds good to me

 

[Mr blobby]

Notes are personal. You can write however you want. There's no right or wrong answer. You can be philosophical or you can be straight to the point. No one else but you knows the type of relationship you have with the people around you, so write the way you feel is best because that's what's genuine.

If I were to write one it would be a philosophical quote. A bit corny / cheesy but that's me.

My favourite is this: "Goodbyes are only for those who love with their eyes. Because for those who love with heart and soul there is no such thing as separation." - Rumi