NSFW Will love kill me today? [poem, ignore]

[SexyIncél]

Someone sent me New Slang, and for some reason it made me write these words:

My biggest weakness
swells in my heart
ok, and in my jeans

laughs in the park
shotgun in the mouth
dancing in damp dirty sheets
love-drunk in the streets

You bit my shoulder
as I licked your neck
till i gasped as I beheld
your smile, my bloody angel

will you wash your grin in the
bloodbath i take in your tub?

I dressed fancy while you
wore dirty converse sneakers
to chill out my passion
as i burn your coolness

all i wanted is to be your
white knight, bloody warrior
fighting for a cause that
makes my eyes look insane,
cumming on the battlefield

then my eyes grow sane
silent glow beholding you
swearing you're not alone
then you'll find I disrobed you
took advantage of your reverie
and yet you won't stop me
as we bang to a silly tune
your nails slapping on my back
like that warm night in the
back seat of your parents' car
song pounding to the beat of our
sticky thighs, telling lies
about how we'll be forever,
but we won't survive the night

 

[stermc]

Not ignoring it. Absolutely GREAT. Keep writing and make sure to send me all of it.

 

[Disappointered]

I'm not sure it's flattering to know your poem appeals to someone like me but do like it.

 

[SexyIncél]

I'm not sure it's flattering to know your poem appeals to someone like me but do like it.

Sure it's flattering! This poem doesn't judge anyone reading it; it just hopes it's worthwhile to some people