Venting Terrible poetry

[TotallyTerrible]

Marceline
My one star
My one light in the sky
is snuffed out
all because I told a lie.

A lost treasure
Like some Christmas object that was always out of reach
A dream forgotten just as you awake
The unforgettable memory of loss
A path brambled by rose
The last dream you'll ever make.

 

[moshimoshi]

I think Its really beautiful It resonates a lot with me

 

[TotallyTerrible]

I think Its really beautiful I resonates a lot with me

thank you so much! <3

 

[Dingusguy]

I like it, I think it paints a pretty picture, and it reminds me of a person in my own life so it felt a little familiar to read

 

[TotallyTerrible]

I like it, I think it paints a pretty picture, and it reminds me of a person in my own life so it felt a little familiar to read

i'm glad i could resonate with you <3