quietwater

quietwater

delusional poet
May 2, 2023
75
I like to use metaphors to talk about how I feel. I'm sorry if you expected something different from this, but it's just a poemish something I wrote because I express myself better like this.
Sorry if it seems strange or if it bothers you.
Take this as you want

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"It's just a sandwich"
But others don't think that way.

If for me it's just food, a feeble sensation of something,
Then, I noticed that it isn't the same for people around me.

If I eat it, everyone will stare, everyone will judge.
And if I don't, everyone will ask why I refuse to eat.

If I eat it will I really feel something? Or would it only be an useless feeling of fullness for a moment, that comes and goes like a shooting star?

If I eat it, people will laugh, because "why should someone who doesn't experience hunger eat something? They don't need it at all!"

They always told me to avoid eating too much, and I feel like they would prefer if I didn't eat at all,

but it's not a big deal.
"It's just a sandwich", and I should buy it.

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imsocold

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Oct 2, 2023
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I rlly like it.
interesting and accurately describes what I often feel..
I would like to see more of your posts!!!
 
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quietwater

delusional poet
May 2, 2023
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I rlly like it.
interesting and accurately describes what I often feel..
I would like to see more of your posts!!!
thank you for the kind words, if my posts make you feel seen and understood I'm glad.
I'll surely post more !
 
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Kompass

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I wish there were more of these ❤️
 
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samsara_96

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I think your poem is great too! It is emotionally deep, easy to read and it even has a bit of humor. You'd have been a famous poet if art was properly valued.
 
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quietwater

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May 2, 2023
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I think your poem is great too! It is emotionally deep, easy to read and it even has a bit of humor. You'd have been a famous poet if art was properly valued.
Thank you so so much, your kind words made me feel really appreciated! I'm glad you enjoyed reading this :)
 
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