Chris Can Fly<3

Chris Can Fly<3

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Feb 20, 2023
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The endless night:

In the endless night I find my solace,
A world of darkness, my only palace.
I escape into my depths, seeking refuge,
safe from a life that's harsh, cruel and deluge.

In this void, I remain lost, my mind astray,
With each step, farther away.
Away from light, away from hope,
Into the shadows, where I can cope.

Here, alone with pain, fear, and strife,
Just the endless night, where I can thrive.
But in this world, I am alone,
With only thoughts, I've ever known.

I hear the whispers, calling me near,
A beckoning voice, with no fear.
It promises peace, it promises rest,
A tempting escape, from the pain that's suppressed.

So I follow its trail, deeper and deeper,
Into the abyss, where the night's a keeper.
It swallows me whole, with no remorse,
As I succumb to its haunting force.

In the endless night, I take my last breath,
With no more sadness, no more depth.
My soul now free, from this earthly plight,
I escape forever, into the endless night.
 
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sorrowful

sorrowful

My exhaustion knows no end
Feb 13, 2023
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thank you for sharing, you're very good with words 🤍
 
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Hitakiri

Hitakiri

Melancholy
Mar 20, 2023
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What I've always loved about poetry, is it allows you to see inside anothers heart. Writing is personal, intimate. We share part of ourselves, when we share what we've written. It's something I can appreciate. Your poem was beautiful, keep it up. I hope to read more of your work in time.

I enjoy writing as well, though I don't do it as often as I'd like. Perhaps eventually I'll share some of my own work.
 
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Chris Can Fly<3

Chris Can Fly<3

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Feb 20, 2023
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What I've always loved about poetry, is it allows you to see inside anothers heart. Writing is personal, intimate. We share part of ourselves, when we share what we've written. It's something I can appreciate. Your poem was beautiful, keep it up. I hope to read more of your work in time.

I enjoy writing as well, though I don't do it as often as I'd like. Perhaps eventually I'll share some of my own work.
Really? genuinely ? I dont usually share poems its jus something ive always done when ive felt a certain way on a personal level, and I.. I appreciate it, im not used to praise .. i think you should , its freeing to express yourself through arts , I like music but, well.. yah, i guess im not so good musically
thank you for sharing, you're very good with words 🤍
thank you <3
 
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FuneralCry

FuneralCry

Just wanting some peace
Sep 24, 2020
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It's a very well written poem, I wish you the best.
 
plurkid

plurkid

Night is right
Mar 16, 2023
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Beautiful. Thanks for showing this part of yourself to us. Sometimes it's the most difficult thing we can do. Many of us aren't brave enough to allow our selves to be seen, but it helps to know we're not alone in our struggle.
 
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huftydumdum

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Apr 10, 2023
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i have no words, this is a beautiful poem.
 
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Jaxveil

The flesh is just a vehicle for the soul
Mar 27, 2023
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Enjoyed this, thank you for sharing.
 
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MrShino

Student
Jul 8, 2021
140
I write alot of poetry myself, and I must say, that was really good. Beautiful and well written!
 

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