Is this a good suicide note?

[MrPromethium]

I feel like I just can't leave nothing. I feel like this last message is a perfect representation of my personality. Any advice on how to improve it?

 

[Mrs.O'Leary'sCow]

I can't get no satisfaction.

 

[Apostle]

I may not know you but I see what you mean about representing your personality. It does come across very genuine and personal, even a bit casual and humorous, and I can see your aim is to explain yourself, but without acting differently than you otherwise would, and without making a big emotional production out of it. I respect that and I don't think I can suggest much more for it, especially not without knowing about your life.
I'll second GoodLuck by saying it's best to mention it isn't their fault (assuming they don't have a part in driving you to this point). And if there's anything you've kept from anyone in your life, that you feel like they need to know, or any other wishes or gestures of affection you feel are necessary, add those in. These are what you plan to be your last words, they look appropriate to me, but I think the best advice that can be given here is to consider it done when you personally feel you've said what you need to say. Look it over and edit it until you feel like it doesn't misrepresent your situation, your feelings, or leave out something important.

 

[JadedGray]

Only you can decide if the note is good enough. Nobody else can decide how best to articulate what comes from your heart and what you want your final goodbye to your loved ones to be.

 

[Jolene40]

If there is anyone really close to you in your life all i would suggest is something from the heart for them explaining how much you love them, its not their fault, this is an end to your suffering so you feel relief and not sadness.
Because i don't know you it is hard to say. Humour is always less depressing so i like that in your letter

 

[TAW122]

I like the quotes that you have, they are short and simple. I believe it is then up to the suicide survivors to interpret them as they see fit since you can't really control that after you are gone.

 

[HelensNepenthe]

I'm not really a fan of this. It's up to you if you think it's sufficient. No one else can make that choice. But if you're looking at a genuine way of writing a note, there's a handful of guidelines online. I'm particularly a fan of this guide.

 

[EddieAllenPoe]

Nice. CREAM. Good song.
And if you want beef, then bring the ruckus
Wu-Tang Clan ain't nuttin ta fuck with...

I don't really see the point of leaving that. Are you writing it for them or for you? If you're writing it for them then it needs more work.

 

[housecat]

I don't know if it really says or explains anything, but it's up to you.