quietwater

quietwater

delusional poet
May 2, 2023
75
As always, I remind you that this is a "poem", I am sorry if you expected anything different from this.
I hardly define myself a poet, but I express myself better with words like this.

.
I am not my anger.
And I am not.
I am a person, a human, with lots of emotions:
love, sadness, joy and fear -
this is how I wish to appear.

I am not my anger.
Or maybe not?
I am a person, still a human, just a bit angry:
I do lash out, snap, and scream -
but after that, I shed a tear.

I am not my anger.
But I am.
I am not a person, nor human, I just don't care:
no feeling I have could compensate
what I am when my voice raise.
.
 
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Abyssal

Abyssal

Kill me
Nov 26, 2023
1,287
I understand and feel what you are trying to convey. Well said.
 
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Buh-bye!

jkfajsd
Jan 10, 2024
234
As always, I remind you that this is a "poem", I am sorry if you expected anything different from this.
I hardly define myself a poet, but I express myself better with words like this.

.
I am not my anger.
And I am not.
I am a person, a human, with lots of emotions:
love, sadness, joy and fear -
this is how I wish to appear.

I am not my anger.
Or maybe not?
I am a person, still a human, just a bit angry:
I do lash out, snap, and scream -
but after that, I shed a tear.

I am not my anger.
But I am.
I am not a person, nor human, I just don't care:
no feeling I have could compensate
what I am when my voice raise.
.
it's really pretty to read
 
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lifewasawillowtv

You’re losing me
Nov 12, 2023
216
Love how it transitions from initially fighting it and being so sure you're not anger, to then questioning it and eventually in the last stanza letting it consume u. At least that's how I interpret it; it's reflective of the all consuming nature of anger and how you can't really fight it no matter how hard your try. It's a very good poem, I enjoyed it a lot.
 
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quietwater

quietwater

delusional poet
May 2, 2023
75
it's really pretty to read
Thank you very much!
Love how it transitions from initially fighting it and being so sure you're not anger, to then questioning it and eventually in the last stanza letting it consume u. At least that's how I interpret it; it's reflective of the all consuming nature of anger and how you can't really fight it no matter how hard your try. It's a very good poem, I enjoyed it a lot.
Yes! That's what I was trying to represent, exactly that! I am glad you enjoyed it. ★
Also, really happy to see a comment from a fellow swiftie – if you want, my dms are open <3
 
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